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AngelWithTheScabbedWings
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PostSubject: Dreams   Wed Aug 16, 2006 7:59 pm

A poem for Cory

At night I sit in my cold dark room
Thinking and hoping I will dream of you,
You will hold me tight never let me go
Donít go fast I want this night slow
I loved you for a long time this is true
Nothing on my mind, No one else but you
The dreams of you my mind misses
The dreams of your sweet passionate kisses
Over all this thought I know I love you
And Cory, Sweetie aint nothin you can do


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PostSubject: Re: Dreams   Thu Aug 17, 2006 7:08 am

i love the rhythm in this poem

one thing, hoping is spelt with one "p"
i had a strange image of you hopping around dreaming of Cory...haha

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PostSubject: Re: Dreams   Thu Aug 17, 2006 3:17 pm

I think she does hop about when she thinks about Cory... she sounds like she is when she talks bout him...
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PostSubject: Re: Dreams   Thu Aug 17, 2006 3:37 pm

What does that mean? scratch
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