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PostSubject: just so i can be first post :p   Fri Aug 11, 2006 12:19 pm

i like to write
and like to read
you others here
know what i mean

so take a glance
write replies
help young writers
to open their eyes

its all good natured
so dont be ashamed
if the comments you get
are not what you aimed...

aha off the top of my head
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PostSubject: Re: just so i can be first post :p   Fri Aug 11, 2006 12:28 pm

He he I like the beat it gives off hte last stansa seems a litle forced though
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PostSubject: Re: just so i can be first post :p   Fri Aug 11, 2006 12:48 pm

This is so funky and cool!!! Woo! Sorry, yeah well, you're really good, creative and also good with rhythm!
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PostSubject: Re: just so i can be first post :p   Fri Aug 11, 2006 1:01 pm

thanks to both and yeah...
the last stanza was a little rough round the edges

any suggestions for a different last verse?

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PostSubject: Re: just so i can be first post :p   Sat Aug 12, 2006 6:20 am

i think its ok >_< then again im not so good at poetry...
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PostSubject: Re: just so i can be first post :p   Sun Aug 13, 2006 4:59 am

Lol, that's really good! Very appropriate! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: just so i can be first post :p   Sun Aug 13, 2006 5:22 am

hah thanks :]

i just wanted to be the first post lol
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PostSubject: Re: just so i can be first post :p   Thu Aug 17, 2006 7:34 pm

lol i think its cool!! btw i love your signature!
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